
Just past the familiar, and the strange parameters of where you are. It’s a memory you can’t quite remember, a feeling you can’t figure out, and frightening abstract waters rush the subconscious.

Just past the familiar, and the strange parameters of where you are. It’s a memory you can’t quite remember, a feeling you can’t figure out, and frightening abstract waters rush the subconscious.
I love this, etikser! You’ve really nailed that feeling of unease beautifully.
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Thank you so much for your generous comments!
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A beautiful expression of what is just on the edges of understanding. Nice work.
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Thanks so much!
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Actually, it reminds me when I have suddenly awaken from a dream– I can’t remember what it was about– as if my awakening pulled a plug and the dream flowed down the drain. Nice verse.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful words and for taking the time to comment.
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